Effective,
Expresses many of my 6 words (storytelling, illustrations, traditional methods, but perhaps not diversity and nature)
Ephemeral character made from paper within a set sold background, semi translucent represents fragility and vulnerability of the man.
Clever use of weather and sound to make people aware of the ideas I am trying to show.
good use of pathetic fallacy
inprovments-
Could I photograph the bowls at the site?
Form… representation of inside and outside the bowl. is the fact the man is inside the bowl is important?
The answer to this is yes and to strengthen this idea I may have to rethink how i show this within my video to make the connection more powerful
Lara Hoad Artist Designer: Maker 